One of the most confusing questions hits everyone’s mind when thinking of buying or renting a home is “Apartment or Independent Home”. Through, many say, a dependent home benefits people privacy and freedom, there are further factors that should be taken in to account for a decision.
In most cases, live in a house means an offer of much more spaces than live in an apartment. Buying or renting a house usually comes with a yard/patio, which is great for accommodating pets and organising parties. That said, the yard/patio means plenty of work, such as mowing the lawn regularly. Also, when people live in a house, there tends to be less noise to deal with, which is excellent those individuals prefer a quiet environment for reading and watching TV.
Over spring and summer, there is another prominent advantage of house people could make a landscape design in the garden by their own preference while others live in the apartment cannot overwrite the community’s agreement of garden design.
The safety issue is always the primary concern of people for living in a house. The apartment commonly provides high barrier wall, complete security system and the security guard who could prevent outsiders unless permitted ones while the house normally locates at suburb areas without a barrier wall. Moreover, individuals choose to live in a house means a loss of facilities as the most apartments built with diversified facilities to cater for community life. Another vital factor that should be considered is the price, live in a house normally cost people double than live in an apartment.
Essentially, the difference between live in a house and live in an apartment boils down to three things: space, safety and cost. People should choose the suitable one that matches with their habits and preference. Personally, I am in favour of an apartment which could provide me more conveniences.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 225, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...ould prevent outsiders unless permitted ones while the house normally locates at sub...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, while, such as, in most cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1613.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15335463259 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85043833894 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562300319489 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 501.3 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.0163238659 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.214285714 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3571428571 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.78571428571 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.429382274615 0.244688304435 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1474306711 0.084324248473 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120920395318 0.0667982634062 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.225875895768 0.151304729494 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104861596666 0.056905535591 184% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.