Fewer and fewer young people are choosing to become teachers. Why do young people not want ti be teachers? How this can be changed ?
Young generation is less interested in choosing teaching as a professional career nowadays and number of young people desiring to become teacher is decreasing constantly. The main reason of this trend is lower pay scale of the teachers. However, this trend can be reversed if the basic salary of teachers is set to a certain minimum amount.
Teachers pay scale has always been debatable issue and it is fair to say that they are paid much less than they actually deserve as they are the cornerstone in building the new generation. Also, one study in cognitive sciences shows that young people are likely to chose a career which pays the most. Survey carried out during the study shows that only 10% of the university students chose teaching as a career option and the reason most of the student gave was the lower pay scale of the teachers. For example, engineers are paid more than double amount than teachers. Hence, comparatively lower pay scale is the main reason why younger generation is less likely to chose teaching as a full time career.
If the base salary of the teachers is increased to the level of other lucrative professions then more and more young people will be motivated in becoming teachers. Young people will find teaching as most full fulling career as they will have sense of positive contribution to society if as a teacher they are paid sufficient amount. The government should address this issue and increase the base salary of the teachers.
Less number of young people are choosing to become teachers. Comparatively lower pay scale of the teachers is the main reason why young generation us less interested in teaching as full time career. increasing the basic salary of the teachers will attract young people in choosing teaching as a professional career.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 49, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to teach'.
Suggestion: to teach
...neration is less interested in choosing teaching as a professional career nowadays and n...
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Line 3, column 391, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to teach'.
Suggestion: to teach
...ly 10% of the university students chose teaching as a career option and the reason most ...
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Line 3, column 674, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to teach'.
Suggestion: to teach
...nger generation is less likely to chose teaching as a full time career. If the base s...
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Line 3, column 688, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...n is less likely to chose teaching as a full time career. If the base salary of the te...
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Line 7, column 62, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Comparatively,
...people are choosing to become teachers. Comparatively lower pay scale of the teachers is the ...
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Line 7, column 182, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...ation us less interested in teaching as full time career. increasing the basic salary of ...
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Line 7, column 200, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Increasing
...rested in teaching as full time career. increasing the basic salary of the teachers will a...
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Line 7, column 282, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to teach'.
Suggestion: to teach
...s will attract young people in choosing teaching as a professional career.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, hence, however, if, so, then, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1491.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92079207921 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59074436102 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.415841584158 0.561755894193 74% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.5652468241 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.5 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6428571429 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.42857142857 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277471009305 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124819036561 0.084324248473 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0982357602381 0.0667982634062 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.22119334827 0.151304729494 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0917921155886 0.056905535591 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.34 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.