Foreign visitors should pay more than local visitors for cultural and historical attractions. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Foreign travelers should pay more than domestic visitors for cultural and historical figures. From my perspective, I completely disagree with this statement due to the following reasons.
Firstly, there are not fair for overseas visitors if they are set a high price than the local people. Cultural and historical attractions are two precious heritage of any country and they often create a chance to introduce these products to other people who came from other regions. If we put a high price for foreign visitors, they could self-identify that they are a unbalance treatment between them and local civilians so they are lack of motivation and passion to come to this country and this region loss a chance to deliver their traditional product to other people. Interestingly, my family come to a specific eastern country, we realized that the price to visit their historical figures is higher for foreign people than the local citizens and we decided to cancel this trip later.
Secondly, the number of international visitors could be reduced if their cost is more than local people. Many countries have their own cultural and historical attractions so they use these factors to attract foreign travelers as many as possible as well as enhance the income from the travel sector. To do that, this region should balance the price between international people and domestic people, this creates confidence for non-local people because they are treated as the citizens of this country. Moreover, this opportunity could improve the cultural diversity of this country as well as create a chance for local people to communicate with non-local people. For instance, our country perceives the crucial of price for foreign people so they put a fair cost between the above kind of travelers and local people then our region experience an increase in the number of international visitors as well as revenue.
To sum up, this essay accommodates many reasons that foreign citizens play an important role in the travel sector of any region so they should be costed at the same price as the local civilians.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 155, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'heritage' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'heritages'.
Suggestion: heritages
...historical attractions are two precious heritage of any country and they often create a ...
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Line 2, column 367, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... they could self-identify that they are a unbalance treatment between them and lo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, well, for instance, kind of, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1752.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09302325581 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69491639286 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.453488372093 0.561755894193 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 558.0 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.0174706568 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.0 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.6666666667 20.7667163134 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.328661265835 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.153271963206 0.084324248473 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0954274628271 0.0667982634062 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.237091379554 0.151304729494 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115417685508 0.056905535591 203% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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