The government is spending a lot of money to discover life on other planets. Some people think that the government is wasting money and should spend more money addressing the problems of public.
To what extent do you agree?
Costs are being incurred by the authorities in searching for life on the moon. Many people oppose this activity and think that government should spend money to solve other public issues like education and health which is more important. I agree with this thought and will also discuss the reasons behind this, in subsequent paragraphs.
In developing countries, people need quality education to make their nation developed in various sectors such as export, finance and many more departments, so government try to start free education for those who are excellent in studies and do not have enough financial resources to complete their qualifications. For instance, at Rishikesh a school name Gyan Dhyan Academy run by a trust provides free education to underprivileged people, after completing their studies students apply for higher posts in various departments and give their services in favour of country. Hence, education is essential because it helps to become potential all over as compared to a particular sector.
Moreover, health is an asset of an individual, with a fit body human can do work hard physically or mentally. As medical costs are touching the heights nowadays, people who cannot afford these expenses get deprived to live healthy and expire in their early age due to severe diseases like cancer. Government should try to open hospitals, clinics and dispensaries at free of cost or at very genuine rate which can be accessible by poor people also so that people can easily take advantage of available sources. To illustrate, Nirmal Ashram Hospital at uttrakhand is a charity hospital where poor people get treated at free of cost and rich can bear cost 50% less than market price. Therefore, spending costs on austrount is not that much essential that the health of the residents.
To conclude, bearing expenses in a particular sector is not a wise decision, rather it will effect on other sectors which need more attention so as plan of overall development can be fulfilled.
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- Many things that used to be done in the home by hands are now being done by machines.Does this development bring more advantages than disadvantages? 84
- Scientist predict that all people will chose to talk the same global language in the future.Do you think this is a positive or negative development? 84
- Some people think books are losing importance as a source of information and entertainment.To what extent do you agree? 78
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Message: Did you mean 'affect'?
Suggestion: affect
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...f overall development can be fulfilled.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, moreover, so, therefore, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1682.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14373088685 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77476049316 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605504587156 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 525.6 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.5299508731 49.4020404114 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.166666667 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.25 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15058680972 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.056426872206 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0858130160875 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0963655200555 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0841676518356 0.056905535591 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.47 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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