Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience
Governments levy heavy taxes on people and in turn exploit this money for the enhancement of the roadway and railways. Although, a few would argue that the roadways have to be given more importance, a majority would feel that it is the railways that should be given more priority. This essay elucidate the points supporting the fact that railways have to be developed and improved than the roadways.
A huge amount has to be spent by the government on railways because a plethora of people are using railways as their mode of transport. Especially, the people who rush to their office in the morning. Railways fins a major utilization by the people. This is because they reduce congestion on the road, and people can travel fast to their workplace. How did people regard railways in the past?
Although some people did not use railways in the previous decades. The introduction of air- conditioned super fast bullet trains have raised the amount of people exploiting it. For example, a survey conducted by the railways department in Combodia suggested that about 63 percent of people preferred railways to road means of transport. Hence it is evident that railways have to flourish well in order to serve the public.
People of some areas, have a belief that roadways are the most comfortable way of moving from one place to another. Both the public transports like the buses, call taxes and the private vehicles such as the cars and two wheelers come under this category. Unlike ancient period where bullet carts, were used excessively, the modern people are exceedingly using their own private vehicles like the four wheelers and motorbikes. People get addicted to luxury and at times use a huge car for just one person to travel. For example, there is ample evidence to indicate the declaration that more private cars are purchased in Europe and the usage of public transport, especially the trains has reduced. Therefore some people want the roads to be overhauled.
To conclude, government should take into account the air pollution caused by the roadways and should take certain measures to ameliorate the railways. Now, it is clear that it is incoherent to claim that roadways must be given meticulous attention.
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...eople regard railways in the past? Although some people did not use railways in the...
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Suggestion: railways'; railway's
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Suggestion: Hence,
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Suggestion: Therefore,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, so, therefore, well, as to, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1868.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 372.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02150537634 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6229507249 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.524193548387 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 580.5 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.1346569209 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.4 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.75 7.06120827912 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103552875028 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0348016466052 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0284485023629 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0635539452107 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0237518585688 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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