Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience
Governments levy heavy taxes on people and in turn utilize this money for the enhancement of roadways and railways. Although, a few would argue that the roads have to be given more importance, a majority would feel that it is the railways that should be given more preference. this essay elucidate the points supporting that railways have to be developed and improved than the roadways.
A huge investment has to be spent by the government on railways because a plethora of people are using railways as their mode of transport. especially, people who rush to their office in the peak hours. railways finds a wide utilization by the people. this is because they reduce congestion on the road, and people can travel fast to their workplaces. How did people consider railways in the past?
Although some people did not use railways in the previous decades, the introduction of air conditioned, super fast bullet trains have raised the amount of people exploiting it. For example, a survey conducted by the railways department in Combodia suggested that about 63 percent of people preferred railways rather than road means of transport. Hence, it is evident that railways have to flourish well in order to serve the public.
people of some areas, have a notion that roadways are the most comfortable way of moving from one place to another. public transports like the buses, call taxes and private vehicles such as the cars and two wheelers come under this category. Unlike ancient period where bullet carts, were used excessively, the modern people are exceedingly using their own private vehicles like the four wheelers and motorbikes. people get addicted to luxury and at times, use a huge car for just one person to travel. For example, there is ample evidence to vindicate the declaration that more private cars are sold out in Europe and the usage of public transport, especially the trains has reduced. Therefore some people want the roads to be overhauled.
To conclude, some analysts might show their anxiety to improve the railways while others have a misconception that roads are the perfect way for locomotion. The administrators of a nation should take into account the air pollution caused by the road transports and should take certain measures to ameliorate the railways without procrastination. Henceforth, it is incoherent to claim that the development of roadways must be given meticulous attention.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, so, therefore, well, while, as to, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2065.0 1615.20841683 128% => OK
No of words: 397.0 315.596192385 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20151133501 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46372701284 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77669394237 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52644836272 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 633.6 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.2862837954 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.25 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.85 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.1 7.06120827912 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111889666165 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0382978778287 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0311487113818 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0714999470184 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.023732324877 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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