The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing. Do you agree or disagree???
The importance and popularity of ecommerce has become increasingly common over time, which will lead to the extinction of traditional stores in both towns and cities in various geographical zones. Personally, I consider this partially true because offline stores, maybe fewer, will always exist notwithstanding the increasing number of online shopping. This essay will discuss both sides using examples from The Vanguard newspaper to demonstrate points and prove arguments.
On one side of the argument, there is almost daily evidence that people, especially the youths, are more inclined to purchase their daily needs and wants (such as designer wears, electronics, electrical appliances, beauty and skincare products) online due to the potential benefits associated with it. The time management and ease in purchasing items at the comfort of their homes irrespective of their locations, are potential growth drivers, giving them the opportunity to take up other daily activities. Consistent with this line of thinking, discounts and promotional campaigns are mostly offered in online sales which significantly attracts target audience within various parts of the country and the world at large. For instance the number of internet users in Nigeria has skyrocketed over the past decades, according to a survey report by The Vanguard newspaper. When asked the reason for their online engagement, over 90% of users confirmed products shopping and services to be their most priority. As a result, ecommerce is projected to steadily gain presence even in the future.
Conversely, although there are significant benefits in online shopping, the multifold advantages of traditional or conventional means of shopping cannot be denied. This is largely because there are some purchases that requires to be sampled, felt or seen in order to make a better decision. To cite an example, foodstuffs, fruits and the texture, size and thickness of some clothing fabrics are sensitive products that are selectively assessed before purchase, which if not well sorted out, would result to a total waste. This makes the presence of stores very significant in any region of the world.
To recapitulate, I reiterate my point by saying that although online sales have surged significantly over the years, more and more people will always patronize offline stores for their daily expenses.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 468, Rule ID: IF_IS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'is'?
Suggestion: is
...ctively assessed before purchase, which if not well sorted out, would result to a ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
conversely, if, may, so, well, for instance, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2009.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 366.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.48907103825 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87954940428 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 176.041082164 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609289617486 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 636.3 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.3219862628 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.5 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1428571429 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.64285714286 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126930816407 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.038714964765 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.039219991721 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0708923023266 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0288998232838 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.86 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.02 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 118.0 78.4519038076 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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