The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in town and cities going. Do you agree and disagree ?
It is a discernible fact that online shopping has become the most preferred means for consumers to buy products. It is gradually transitioning from being a trend to becoming the norm for many households. Thus, in regards to whether this phenomenon will lead to physical store becoming obsolete, I agree entirely with this view and will justify the same in the following paragraphs.
First of all, it is essential to point out the key difference which has been pivotal in the success of online stores. It is the ability to render just about every aspect of the shopping experience from a physical store but at the comfort of a person’s home and the convenience of a few clicks or touches. Since such a degree of simplicity cannot be emulated offline, the public is naturally more inclined towards online shops. Secondly, the availability of nearly every commodity and service and more additions by the second has tipped the scales in favour of online shopping.
Furthermore, there are various overheads involved when a retailer is operating a physical store, such as rent, power, maintenance, etc., which are absent in the case of online stores. As a result, more often than not, retail stores suffer losses annually. Accordingly, the revenue generated and thereby profit earned also varies vastly between the two. Therefore, many businesses nowadays are also seeking avenues to shift towards e-commerce.
Although there are exceptions and a segment of offline and online purchasers will always prefer the entire experience of visiting a store and purchasing a product leading to a few operational shops. Nevertheless, observing the uniform rise in the number of online shoppers during the pandemic or emergency times, it can be easily deduced which is and will be the dominant form of commerce.
In conclusion, I would like to say that people will always prefer the more effortless option if presented with choices and the same has been seen with shopping. Hence, in my opinion, the arrival of an era where online shopping is the only choice left is inevitable.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 211, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, first, furthermore, hence, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, in conclusion, such as, as a result, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1727.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06451612903 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77156975114 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58651026393 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 563.4 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.9788306438 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.133333333 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7333333333 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4666666667 7.06120827912 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162948422198 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0479669713327 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0404661191222 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0857078146432 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0379603875866 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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