Hapiness is considered very important in life. Why is it difficult to define?
What factors are important in achieving hapiness?
In this modern era, there is an ongoing deliberation among people on the way of defining hapiness, while people find difficulties in defining hapiness due to various reasons. In this essay, I shall discuss on the factors which defines hapiness and the factors which are important in achieving happiness.
First and foremost, hapiness depends on personal factors, such as satisfaction with what they have. The environment and the people around plays a pivotal role in deciding our level of hapiness. Apart from that, the ability of satisfying ones needs and wants influence on personal hapiness, in other words individuals who earn sufficient can be happier than the people who earn only for their survival.
On the other hand, some people feels happy with heir educational qualifications since it can be taken as a factor deciding personal hapiness. Besides that, the family members, friends, subordinates can also makes people happy according to the level of relationship they maintain with them. It is evident, when people have simple needs and wants they feel happier because they do not experience difficuties in satisfying those with minimal effort andavailable resources.
In conclusion, it is recommended the government to take hapiness as a measure in determining the national development though it is a qualitative measures. It is also believed, that national security is one of a major criteria which affects on individual happiness, because people of secured countries live in a fearless environment compared with people who are living in unsecured countries like India, Sri Lanka and Pakisthan. Therefore, government must take initiatives to ensure secured country to its citizens.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: measure
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Suggestion: criterion
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, if, so, therefore, while, apart from, in conclusion, such as, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1440.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43396226415 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94125224286 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596226415094 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.2269364654 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.909090909 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0909090909 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6363636364 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13712666193 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0609941883983 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0963220529724 0.0667982634062 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0949725523283 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109827591813 0.056905535591 193% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.51 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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