Cars come in all different shapes and sizes. Some prefer a large one, while others a compact one. What are the advantages and disadvantages of each type and which would you prefer?
In modern era, there is an ongoing deliberation among people on the advantages and disadvantages of using large vehicles. While, some people argue that disadvantages overwigh the advantages, on my point of view we can enjoy lot of advantages by using a small vehicle than buying a large vehicle. In this essay, I shall explain the reasons effecting my view.
First and foremost, if the family is with big number of members, a large vehicle is required for their travelling purposes.
Other than that, a large vehicle can be used to for domestic purposes and it can also use for travelling around the country on leisure purposes.
On the other hand, a small family can manage their travelling with a small vehicle. Besides that, it will help to reduce the traffic conjetion on road. Instead of using, a big vehicle in travelling to office people can use a small vehicle because it can help to reduce traffic on office hours. Nevertheless, the best option the government can take is promote public transport to increase the confidence level of the passengers of a particular country.
In conclusion, it is recommended governments to promote small vehicles to reduce enviromental pollution. In order to do so, government can give tax holidays on small vehicles.It nutshell, vehicle manufactures should manufacture vehicles in different colours and shapes in order to satisfy cutomer requirements.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, if, nevertheless, so, while, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 6.10837438424 180% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1176.0 1207.87684729 97% => OK
No of words: 228.0 242.827586207 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15789473684 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96757121508 2.71678728327 109% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 139.433497537 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543859649123 0.580463131201 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 379.8 379.143842365 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.65517241379 219% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.5811815805 50.4703680194 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.909090909 104.977214359 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7272727273 20.9669160288 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.54545454545 7.25397266985 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.074258218607 0.242375264174 31% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0308588619689 0.0925447433944 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0380350560211 0.071462118173 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0446632136605 0.151781067708 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.037184950312 0.0609392437508 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 12.6369458128 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 53.1260098522 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 11.5310837438 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 55.0591133005 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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