Cars come in all different shapes and sizes. Some prefer a large one, while others a compact one. What are the advantages and disadvantages of each type and which would you prefer?
modern car designs makes itself available in a variety of shapes and sizes to meet different target consumer needs. There is a compelling notion that whether a compact car is more compelling than a larger one to meet our modern family needs. A large car would provide a very comfortable environment that is a compact cannot cope it, for example, leg room space. However, a compact car is a cost effective option for modern family. In this essay I will elaborate both arguments and explain why I believe a compact car is more appropriate to meet a modern family needs in city.
The cost of fuel consumption is one of key considerations for consumer when they are considering buy a car. The fuel cost takes a significant portion of family budget. one of reasons influences cost of fuel is foreign exchange rate. Unfortunately, the exchange rate of Ausralian dollars against US dollars fluctuated a lot recently as a result of unstable political environment in middle East countries. Obviously, a compact car has a smaller engine that consums less fuel, so the fuel cost is relatively lower than a larger car.
On the other hand, large car provides a comfortably leg room that a compact car can't offer. this feature is particular compelling to a person who need to drive a lot. Furthermore, a large car is more visible in a busy traffic road, that is one of important safety features which is a compact car not able to do so.
To recaputaled my argument points mentioned above, I am incline that a compact car is a cost effective option to drive in a busy city which is outweight the benefit of large car. I believe a small car is a better car for modern family.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, so, for example, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 8.36945812808 24% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 31.9359605911 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1374.0 1207.87684729 114% => OK
No of words: 295.0 242.827586207 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65762711864 5.00649968141 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80297375635 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 139.433497537 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.508474576271 0.580463131201 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 455.4 379.143842365 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 7.0 1.56157635468 448% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.7346528748 50.4703680194 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.6 104.977214359 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 20.9669160288 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.86666666667 7.25397266985 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.33497536946 150% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206254811719 0.242375264174 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0782385640027 0.0925447433944 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0515111222317 0.071462118173 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138886939601 0.151781067708 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0409695719257 0.0609392437508 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 12.6369458128 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 53.1260098522 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 11.5310837438 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.32886699507 98% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 55.0591133005 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.