IELTS 13 G T4 Essay
Many people believe that keep cleanness on your place of work and home it is crucial. I totally agree with this opinion because tidiness in your homeplace can boost the mood of its residents, and also neatness of your workplace can save time and helps to avoid injuries.
The main reason why I believe that neatness is essential in home places is mood. For example, with tidy blankets on your bed, you will have a good sleep, which increases your freshness in the morning. In addition, neat and clean clothes can be very important if you work with people. The next reason is the time which you will spend cleaning and organizing all the stuff in your house. To illustrate this, did you ever forget where your keys from the car or where are essential papers for your meeting are? In case if they had been placed in the right place, you could save a lot of time searching for them. Obviously, the order and keeping for things as well as for people is significant.
Also, it is crucial to keep neatness at your workplace because it will save your time on preparing you to work and help you to avoid getting injuries. To illustrate this example, you can imagine if many people in one department use the same instrument and if someone did not place the tool on its place, you would need to call them you would spend time on searching and also everyone will be nervous about this situation. Another case, you can visualize you someone spilled some machine oil on the ground, and a person will fall on this place broke a leg for example, and as a consequence, it will be a big problem for all company.
In conclusion, I have a strong opinion that people need to keep clean their homes and workplaces.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, well, as for, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1388.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.49190938511 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34901079589 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.498381877023 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.4507430468 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.769230769 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7692307692 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.07692307692 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.244688304435 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.084324248473 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.151304729494 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 50.2224549098 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.06 12.4159519038 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.23 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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