If we want to save the future of the planet, we will have to drastically change our way of life. What is your opinion?
There is a controversial issue about the importance of protecting the Earth. Some ecologists state that people should alter their attitude to the environment. However, some politicians argue that it is not necessary. In this essay, I will discuss both points of view and agree with the idea of that these serious changes are inevitable.
Let us start with reasons why some ecologists claim that people ought to bring changes into their way of life in order to keep the planet healthy. The first reason is that it will help them pass unique ecosystem to the upcoming generations. People usually exploit natural resources unwisely, because they strive for large profits, but unless they stop this careless exploitation, their grandchildren will have no wildlife to enjoy. Another factor is that it will negatively affect mankind. Any damage to biodiversity on the Earth will also have detrimental effect on human wellbeing, since they are also dependent part of it. Therefore, it is clear that people should modify their style of life to preserve the planet.
Nevertheless, some politicians advocate that people should not alter their lifestyle. They justify their opinion with the following arguments. Firstly, nature stabilizes itself. The environment is capable to absorb any harmful outcome of human activity on its own, so that human beings should use the wealth of nature at the the same pace. Secondly, the development of humanity would slow down. Technological progress would decelerate heavily, if they decide to protect the Earth for future, which needs the creation of new ideas as well as innovations. As a result, after analyzing, it is obvious that people should not stop the planetary exploitation.
In conclusion, although some politicians propagate that humanity should utilize natural resources without any improvements, I think that it is essential for people to transform their way of life in order to save the world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 322, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...ings should use the wealth of nature at the the same pace. Secondly, the development of...
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Line 7, column 322, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...ings should use the wealth of nature at the the same pace. Secondly, the development of...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, i think, in conclusion, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1641.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2935483871 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80886251654 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583870967742 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.7818196787 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.1666666667 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2222222222 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.77777777778 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112097535487 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0327080484271 0.084324248473 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0363785962361 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0698199251295 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0501746975201 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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