If we want to save the future of the planet, we will have to drastically change our way of life. What is your opinion?
These days, this the responsibilty of every human being to change their way of life in oder to save their planet. But what is the most effective method of dealing with this rising issue? Some people belive that We should change our style of living to ptrotect our glob. I completely agree with idea and in this essay i will support my opinion with examples.
Firstly, reduce the usage pf plastic in our daily lifestyle. In other words, plastic bags cannot recycle and effect the enviorment of our world. For example, when the plastic has been dumbed at the dumping site it emits a dangerous gass which effects the planet.
Another reason why i agree to change our lifestyle is that we should grow more plantes to protect the ozone layer of our planet. Take pollution as an example, as the world has been modernizing the number of vehicles has been also increasing. The vehcials use petrol and pollute the world. I strongly believe that we should reduce the numner of vehicles and grow more plants in our society.
In conclusion, although it is a common beleive that we need to change the way of our lifestyle in oder to protect our world. Personally, I beleive we should grow more trees and control the pollution to protect our planet.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, so, for example, in conclusion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1032.0 1615.20841683 64% => OK
No of words: 219.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71232876712 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37859662386 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 176.041082164 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538812785388 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 317.7 506.74238477 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.1273740286 49.4020404114 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 79.3846153846 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8461538462 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.92307692308 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299091581492 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0995166573886 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0783934465859 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177182029475 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0799137392202 0.056905535591 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.0946893788 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.74 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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