Increase the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems.
To what extend do you agree or disagree?
What other measures do you think might be effective?
Have the traffic and pollution problems become most ones that needed to be solved? In fact, several suggestions are being exposed for overcoming these problems. One of these suggestions is to increase the cost of fuels. It is believed that this may reduce the usage of vehicles but it may also have disadvantages.
In my opinion, the hike of fuel prices will result in an undesirable increase of all other consumable items such as food, medicine and domestic power bills, which will have a negative effect in people’s daily life. This may cause a defect in the layers of society and country economics. It can be said that, the disadvantages of prices increase will overburden the benefits of it.
According to an article which was published in Al-Ahram Weekly In, 2014 that, the effect of fuel cost will reach only 5% of the people who are using their cars in daily bases, because they do not have other method of transportation to reach their work. For this reason government should provide means of public transports which are cheap, reliable and environment friendly in order to reduce the percentage of fossil fuel vehicles in the streets, which will benefit in saving the environment and reduce the traffic. Thus, People will choose to rely on the available transportation to save their time, money and health.
At the End, Modern technology has provided us with new inventions like electric vehicles which can be a perfect solution for these problems mentioned above, if it will be implemented in a suitable way to fit people’s needs.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider replacing "in a suitable way" with adverb for "suitable"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...tioned above, if it will be implemented in a suitable way to fit people's needs.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, thus, in fact, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1347.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98888888889 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75926920207 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592592592593 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 78.0741723548 49.4020404114 158% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.25 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.08333333333 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108420955721 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0465102608634 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0463442418323 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0709829577103 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0453295478718 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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