An increase in the production of consumer goods results in damage to the natural environment. What are the reasons and possible solutions?
Many companies raising the amount of their manufactured consumer producrs cause destruction to the natural resources. I believe there may be serveral reasons behind this situation, but people can still solve it.
To begin with, there are several reasons why overproduction of factories' items make harmful impacts our nature. Firstly, overconsumption would lose our natural resources, and people will feel a lack of resources in the future. In mordern society, many people want various items, so most of the companies had to produce their products. However, some of the things we buy becomes wasted items and are thrown in trash, so some countries suffer from garbage problems. Secondly, some individuals want to gain special clothes, bags and shoes which are made of wild aniaml's skin. this situation harms and do not keep specific species of animals. And lastly, a lot of factories make various pollutions as water, land, air and so on. Most of the factories built near the river or ocean, for example, just throw away their toxic wastes into the river. Thus, creating water pollution, causing sea creatures to die and leading to human skin disease.
Fortunately, there is one solution for saving our ecosystem and that is for the governments to make a policy to control the manufacturing industry. When the government limits the production in a month or a year, we can save our resources for a brighter future. Furthermore, they can order companies to use alternative resources, such as solar power instead of fuel-generated power. If there is no limit produce items and companies continue to overuse our natural resources. Nobody will realise how much of our natural resources is left and why people have to save our environment. For example, green areas would slowly disappear if there is no policy made, especially, the Amazon which is the best place to make a lot of air and is the best natural habitat for wild creatures.
In conclusion, overproduction causes various problems to living creatures and the nature, but, I suppose that the governments have a solution about this situation.
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Suggestion: some
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...es which are made of wild aniamls skin. this situation harms and do not keep specifi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, lastly, may, second, secondly, so, still, thus, for example, i suppose, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1765.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13081395349 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81135613119 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575581395349 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 552.6 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.87376741 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 98.0555555556 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1111111111 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.66666666667 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0848053329056 0.244688304435 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0259918879568 0.084324248473 31% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0267656145616 0.0667982634062 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0559878473438 0.151304729494 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0276362066864 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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