Some people think that politicians have the greatest influence on the world. Other people, however, believe that scientists have the greatest influence. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion.
Some folks argue that politicians have powerful affect all over the world, on the order hand, some people say that scientists have the best power influence. In this essay, I will discuss both side views and I believe scientists would be more effective to the world.
To begin with, some people believe that politicians give to effect through their rules. Nowadays, some politicians make rules in our society some people do not follow the rule, they have to go jail or even they could die. For example, some people do not visit few countries, the governments control and check the entry of air plan. Due to the fact that in South Korea, citizens can not go in North Korea, they are separate country. If South Korea visit there in North Korea, they can suspect criminals about preparing a war or bring North people. Moreover, people are protected our rules from politicians, the reason why, if we do not have rules people can merder anywhere.
On the other hand, in my opinion some individuals argue that scientists give convenience items and they can control the world. Some scientists develop a lot of weapons to use countries war, technological machines and so on. Also, the governments invest huge money to technology for convenient life, develop the weapon to prepare future wars. For instance, few decades ago, we do not have any kind of technological machines such as super computer, jet plain and various weapons. Furthermore, if we do not have scientists in the world, people can not make medical equipments, medicines, weapons and other convenient items. Also, people do not find a lot of diseases's causes and solutions. In the past, people can not find cure cancer but they can get their healthy back, because scientists find treatment to disease.
In conclusion, some individuals tend to follow the politician due to the fact that, they are afraid of judgement to rules. However, I believe scientists have the greatest effect in the world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 675, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... have rules people can merder anywhere. On the other hand, in my opinion some in...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, such as, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1641.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97272727273 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60518131748 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.515151515152 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 501.3 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 23.9266468412 49.4020404114 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 96.5294117647 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4117647059 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.29411764706 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.328340860625 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113358807813 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107551504642 0.0667982634062 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.22794413482 0.151304729494 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0760646203803 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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