An increasing number of people are changing their careers. What are the reasons? Do you think it is positive or negative?
It has been recently observed that the majority of people have started moving to various career choices, instead of sticking to their age old professions. With the advent of westernization, many have shifted their inclination towards the industrial and technical sectors, which has indeed left its impact, in either way. This essay will discuss the reason why most individuals prefer shifting their careers, followed by its effects.
There are myriad of causes behind altering one's profession in today's time. First and foremost being, the development which is taking place at a rapid speed in most sectors. People from rural areas are relocating to cities, hoping a better lifestyle, leaving behind their traditional jobs. Another most compelling factor for career shift is education. With the higher number of educated populace, preference of white collar jobs has increased to a great extent. Luring pay-checks cannot be ignored, while considering the entire occupation shift.
Albeit, every major change brings with it, its impact. My opinion lies somewhere in the middle, as moving to a different profession, deeming the need of the hour, is a sensible choice. At the same time, forgetting the traditional occupation altogether, simply because of its physically demanding nature, is in itself a negative development of the entire society. For example, today, the young generation is hardly inclined to work in the agricultural sector, despite the enormous developments.
To conclude, multiple factors have contributed towards the changes which societies are witnessing now. Altering careers in once life is entirely a personal choice, yet governments must device some strategies to promote the basic professions and try to inculcate interest in them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, while, for example, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1494.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53333333333 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83723043534 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.692592592593 0.561755894193 123% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.1963349027 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.6 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.8 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137443610331 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0385159184695 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.034324637045 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0735177739819 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0312810997892 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.49 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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