An increasing number of professionals, such as doctors and teachers, are leaving their own poorer countries to work in developed countries. What problems does this cause? What solutions can you suggest to deal with this situation?
Due to the migration now a society have a variety of people from different races. Few people think a community with people from the various ethnic group and country aids for the development of the nation faster. I disagree with the statement because the nation with more culture creates dispute among them also there are more cultures, more festivals, and more holidays.
Firstly, the connection between people from the different cultural background is argumentative. They have different approaches and myth and are in a bound of a religion, such factor can play a vital role in creating arguments among them. Though some societies have a dominant population from a single religion and they distract other people in local development. For example, Nepal has lots of religion and when the government govern some budget for the development of education, then the one who leads the political party uses those amount with the races he belongs. Such factors can make conflict among society members rather than harmony.
Finally, the imbalance between different cultural perspective makes negative development rather than the positive. Even, the higher-level authorities should support all traditions equally and prepare an agenda for their conservation, they celebrate much religion. Which has a direct impact in a work, seamlessly organization remain closed for a longer period of time and which lead the country behind. In India, the scientist made research, why India is not marching forward as others? and come to the conclusion that large ethnic group and populations are also one major factor for this. The cast was the major blocking factor for launching the development campaigns.
In conclusion, I believe with migration it makes society worse rather than best, in spite of the fact different causes makes them shift from one place to another but creates cultural imbalances.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...organization remain closed for a longer period of time and which lead the country behind. In I...
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Line 5, column 487, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: And
...ndia is not marching forward as others? and come to the conclusion that large ethni...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, so, then, for example, in conclusion, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1590.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31772575251 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71990056516 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588628762542 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.2392094155 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.0 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9333333333 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.93333333333 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.093789836429 0.244688304435 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0309651596253 0.084324248473 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.021276072386 0.0667982634062 32% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0554429683481 0.151304729494 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0149836398144 0.056905535591 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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