An interesting place (village/city...) you have been to.
I had an apportunity to visit Ho Chi Minh city last year. As I remembered, maybe this was a beautiful summer day when I was surfing Facebook, and my friend texted me and invited me to go for a trip in Sai Gon together.
At first, I was both surprised and excited because I have never been to Ho Chi Minh city before. Later, I accepted his offer and I book a seat immediately. I departed about 3 p.m. on Phuong Trang coach and, It takes 4 hours to reach my destination. I was a bit exhausted because I had car sick. Then my friend came and picked me up to his place. On the way home, He drove me to a lot of well-known places as Landmark, Duc Ba church,... This is the first time I have seen such a bustling and also beautiful city like this. I was overwhelmed by many tall building and the noise here, It made me feel like I was in a different country. The evening in Ho Chi Minh city was crowded with people and a lot of traffic congestions. I took many photos as a memory that remarked the first time in my life when coming to Sai Gon.
The next day, according to our initiative, we enjoyed many special street foods along the pavement whenever we took a rest. Sai Gon known as a King of Cuisines, and it was abolutely true. When it comes to Thao Cam Vien, I had a chance to look those animals like white tigers, bears, giraffes... in person. I recognized that we lack awareness of our wildlife as protected the animals from being endangered as well. In the afternoon, we came back home and went shopping groceries for the up coming party in the evening. It has been a long time since have not seen each other. The atmosphere of the party was very exciting and it is also one of the best wonderful memories in my life.
Because I had a course in the next day, so I left Sai Gon at midnight. I experienced many valuables time with my bestfriends. I hope I have chance to visit HCM city agian after COVID -19 pandemic is over.
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...ime in my life when coming to Sai Gon. The next day, according to our initiativ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, look, may, so, then, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 53.0 24.0651302605 220% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1557.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 373.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.17426273458 5.12529762239 81% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51412500853 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544235924933 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 505.8 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 5.43587174349 331% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.0436000485 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.7727272727 106.682146367 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9545454545 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.90909090909 7.06120827912 27% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125639340285 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0358613476111 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0543266911135 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0743560603097 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0322728629643 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.7 13.0946893788 51% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 50.2224549098 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.61 12.4159519038 53% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.93 8.58950901804 81% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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