In recent years, one of the results of highly improved societies is, people use their own cars more and more. Therefore, we see heavy traffic on the streets. Consequently, the rate of driving penalties increase. It is believed that the heavy fines should be applied to the drivers violating the traffic regulations. I definitely advocate that this idea can be practical for two reasons which are discussed in the following paragraphs.
In my point of view, the first consequence of applying heavy fines is that careless person will be more careful in driving. These number of people obey the regulations because of fearing to pay such a huge money. So, as the time goes on, the rate of traffic offender penalties widely decrease. Moreover, the rate of accidents in the result of breaking the rules such as unauthorized over speed and overtaking will be less.
On the other side, in the long term, these heavy charges improve people's driving habits. For example, few years before, the government applied heavily paid fines for not fastened the seat belt. As the statics were shown, after a year, the rate of penalties in this case highly decreased. Now, we can see a majority of people fasten the seatbelt As a result, the persons who killed in accidents for this reason reduced.
As the final word, I believe that if we cannot change our driving habits into a better way, these heavy fines can play a useful role for traffic offenders who break the law.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, if, moreover, so, therefore, for example, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1220.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86055776892 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51445875238 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601593625498 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 380.7 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.4260550941 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.1428571429 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9285714286 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.92857142857 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185028795737 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0719222867114 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105924384062 0.0667982634062 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117385679905 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0617957547438 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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