This morning, you were in a hurry when you went to your office. Therefore, you forgot to pick up your handbag when yo get off the bus at your destination.
Write a letter to the manager of the bus station, explain what your handbag looks like and why it is important to you. Then, ask him/her to help you find your handbag.
Dear Sir/ Madam;
I am writing this letter to inform you about the problem that occurred this morning when I was going to my office with the bus services in the area under your management.
I usually take a bus number 85 to get to my workplace every morning. Today, I woke up late so I was in a hurry. Unfortunately, I left my handbag on the seat when I got off the bus at the 10th station. My handbag is a leather one in brown. I have 30 dollars in it but it is not important. I am so anxious about my two credit cards, certification card, and my driving lisence.
Would you please help me about how I can find my handbag as soon as possible or who I should refer to in that case in your department.
I appreciate if you inform me about your prompt investigation.
Faithfully yours,
John Smith
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 658.0 937.175257732 70% => OK
No of words: 154.0 206.0 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.27272727273 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52273666998 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65237286242 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.642857142857 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 203.4 290.88556701 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.4092817916 44.8134815571 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.8 76.5299724578 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.1 4.34317383033 25% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282822977071 0.216113520407 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0957714756528 0.0766984524023 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0865456143388 0.0603063233224 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180522598748 0.12726935374 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0381448506063 0.0580467560999 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.4 8.37731958763 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.19 8.71597938144 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.15 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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