it is thought by some dirty school teachers role is to motivate and inspire student. However, other people believe that teachers primary role is to pass on knowledge
What do you think is the role of teacher
A good teacher is like a candle-it consumes itself to light way for others and they are the role model for their students. Some people assert that it is the duty of school instructors that they encourage and inspire their learners while others deem that passing knowledge to the students is the main duty of them. I agree with the formal statement which I can portray in the following segments.
As far as my views are concerned, teachers are the torchbearers for their children so they should give them the academic knowledge as well as motivate them to words their work because in the fast pace of life, both the parents are busy to earn their bread and butter and have hectic schedules of work so that they can give the confortable life to there offsprings .Due to this they have no time for their children. So in the case, it is the duty of the teachers that they motivate there disciples. Because children spend their most of the time with their teachers such as, in schools and tuition centres.
Leaping further, mentors are like the oars of the boat and children are boarded on their boards. Indeed, all the things are in the tutors hand to make learners successful person in future or ruin their life. They ought to give them suggestion to acquire the goals of their life and it is radical also because students are in their critical part of life and one wrong step of them , wipe out their whole future. In addition, instructor should give them their best so that they acquire the knowledge about their subjects and able to make their carrier bright and use this knowledge judiciously in future.
To recapitulate, every one has their own views, I do not deny any of them but I still reiterate my opinion ,it is responsibility of the torchbearers that they should make sure the thrive future of their students by giving them subjective knowledge as well as moral and ethical knowledge and their hardships will reflect from their students work in future.it is thought by some dirty school teachers role is to motivate and inspire student. However, other people believe that teachers primary role is to pass on knowledge
What do you think is the role of teacher
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, still, well, while, in addition, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 61.0 24.0651302605 253% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1795.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 383.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68668407311 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42384287591 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41236231032 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.477806788512 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 545.4 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 118.057777757 49.4020404114 239% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 149.583333333 106.682146367 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.9166666667 20.7667163134 154% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242037250456 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127525292816 0.084324248473 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.188292170627 0.0667982634062 282% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.233333187837 0.151304729494 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.175568593084 0.056905535591 309% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.93 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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