Job satisfaction is much more important than job satisfaction . Do you agree or disagree?

Grammar and spelling errors:
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... choose a Job with high wage even if it doesnt appeal to you at all.I completely disag...
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... even if it doesnt appeal to you at all.I completely disagree with this opinion a...
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...ion is much more important than salary. First of all,I believe that job satisfac...
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.... First of all,I believe that job satisfaction gives peo...
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...fulfillment that no money can guarantee.Even if someone is earning a high salary ,bu...
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...Even if someone is earning a high salary ,but feels tensed and compromises with t...
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...salary ,but feels tensed and compromises with this conscience , this person wont ...
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...ed and compromises with this conscience , this person wont enjoy his life .While,...
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...cience , this person wont enjoy his life .While,pursuing one s interest will allwa...
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...ence , this person wont enjoy his life .While,pursuing one s interest will allways br...
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..., this person wont enjoy his life .While,pursuing one s interest will allways bring pleas...
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...ng pleasure and feeling of satisfaction.For example,a lot of famous researcherst ma...
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... and feeling of satisfaction.For example,a lot of famous researcherst made their c...
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...s but they were passionate about science .Hence, it is more important to choose th...
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...but they were passionate about science .Hence, it is more important to choose the kin...
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...ou happy than look only at high salary. Secondly, doing what you like keeps you ...
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...ted and therefore leads to career growth .In other words,there is strong relations...
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...d and therefore leads to career growth .In other words,there is strong relationshi...
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...e leads to career growth .In other words,there is strong relationship between job sati...
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...tween job satisfaction and productivity.People who love their jobs can easily excel in...
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...f work achieve better results than those,who put salary on the first place.For insta...
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...those,who put salary on the first place.For instance ,if a person choose career of ...
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...t salary on the first place.For instance ,if a person choose career of their inter...
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...er of their interset allways get sucess.Thus,advantages of jobs that keep you satisf...
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...f their interset allways get sucess.Thus,advantages of jobs that keep you satisfied outweig...
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Line 1, column 1359, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...of low salary in long term prospective. To conclude, I strongly believe job sati...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, look, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, for instance, first of all, in other words

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1194.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 227.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25991189427 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.24317120018 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625550660793 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 368.1 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 56.0 20.2975951904 276% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 190.69265193 49.4020404114 386% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 298.5 106.682146367 280% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 56.75 20.7667163134 273% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 32.5 7.06120827912 460% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 26.0 5.01903807615 518% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.383577959026 0.244688304435 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.262962197604 0.084324248473 312% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0996492161852 0.0667982634062 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.383577959026 0.151304729494 254% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 31.7 13.0946893788 242% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 14.64 50.2224549098 29% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.1 11.3001002004 222% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.12 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.31 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 9.78957915832 301% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 24.4 10.1190380762 241% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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