A lot of places in the world rely on tourism as a main source of income. Unfortunately, tourism can also be a source of problems if it is not managed correctly. Describe the advantages and disadvantages of tourism in the modern world. Do you think that benefits of tourism outweigh its drawbacks?
Recent decades have witnessed the increasing popularity of tourism industry. Many people claim their benefits in term of a surging of earnings, while others state their drawbacks regarding causing polluted environment. In my opinion, the merits of tourism outnumber their drawbacks.
On the one hand, the advantage of developed tourism industry will earn much profit. This means that the tourists who visit the places such as historical museums, landscape or markets spend money there buying souvenirs products and service, especially the rich is properly willing to pay a large amount of money for luxury services. As a result, they will pay more taxes for the governments. This amount of money can be used to invest in many fields such as healthcare, education, which leads to benefit society as whole. For instance, Bhutan being a remote country which is well-known whole the word due to the reputation of the happiest country attracts a lot of tourists who pay for fee to explore its cultural.
On the other hand, the promotion of tourism would place a pressure on the local environment. This is because an excessive level of carbon footprint, which comes from the surging of international flies or local transportation to serve tourists when visiting a destination, leaves into atmosphere might causing air pollution. Moreover, the increasing of the demand for goods leave more garbage which was thrown away. As a result, detrimental impacts on the environment lead to possibility unstainable economic development If they are not managed correctly.
In conclusion, the increasing tourism might provide people with making money whereas their damage that results from polluted contamination will effect society. I believe that advantages will likely outweigh disadvantages in the long run.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'affect'?
Suggestion: affect
...esults from polluted contamination will effect society. I believe that advantages will...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, regarding, so, well, whereas, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1516.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37588652482 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88794465577 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627659574468 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.2149319282 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.285714286 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1428571429 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.57142857143 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122843695703 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0490514219241 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0449801378918 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0751786365856 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0123588612483 0.056905535591 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.78 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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