Some people say that government should spend more money taking care of elderly people while others think that government spending should be spent more on the education of young people. Discuss and give opinion.
Certain people are one of the opinion(s) that local authorities should spend more money looking after older person in terms of the responsability of sharing burdens with them, while others believe that education system for the young need to bee invested more money by government because of an aim to improve citizens’ intellectual level and reduce the unemployment rate. This essay will discuss both views and give my personal opinion that developing education might be the most effective mothod.
There are a wide range of reasons why it is often believed that taking care of senior citizens seems to a necessary policy, one of which is adminstration should take resposbility for sharing burdens with older aldult when they do not enough health to enter the labour market. This is because when old person was still young, they devoted themshelves to the work as well as econimic prosperity and paid for taxes throughout their lives. Therefore, they have their right to get deserving pension from authorities for their efforts.
In spite of above argument, some support the view that it might be considered beneficial allow the young to be offered financial support from government. In fact, if they help general publics enhance litaracy, which leads to a surging of qualified human resources. For example, Vietnamese goverment spnosors a large of schoolarships encourage talented students and by doing this, they can creat a well-educated labour for future. As a result, the work productivity might boost. Furthermore, the priority to education development tends to reduce the unemployment rate. This means that these well-trained people are likely to land a better job later to support their family including older people.
In conclusion, although it might seem necessary for governments to spend money on caring elderly, I personally that there are various reasons for them to set a state budget om education
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, look, so, still, therefore, well, while, for example, in conclusion, in fact, as a result, as well as, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1610.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24429967427 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8147921569 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625407166124 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 504.0 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 84.184445317 49.4020404114 170% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.166666667 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5833333333 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9166666667 7.06120827912 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241493766528 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.069291397675 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0867694446655 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151045303587 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112720473119 0.056905535591 198% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.78957915832 199% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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