A lot of social problems can be related to teenagers these days. Some feel that this is because parents are not able to spend enough time to take care of their teenage child. Do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, a large number of social issues associated with teen people. It is thought by some people that parents are spending less time taken care of their teenage children. I agree with the statement because they need more affection and family is the best teacher.
To begin with, teenage is considered to be the most fragile time when it comes to character development as the majority of the criminals admitted that they commit their first crime at that age. As a result, showing extra care is crucial. In addition, it will make them realize they are special. For example, parents who spent quality time with their teen child are more likely to understand them properly and help them to overcome any problems. Cleary, investing more time to look after teen people would prevent them to cause any social issues.
Furthermore, Parents are the best teacher to teach children about moral values which will not only benefited them but also the society as well. For instance, teaching the teen child to respect older or assist the poor will lead them to be more considering.
Moreover, they would learn to build a better society that will affect the nation in a good way resulting in fewer problems. To do this it is necessary to spend adequate time with teenagers. So, give proper time to adolescent are highly recommended.
In conclusion, now teen people are engaged with a number of social problems. spending not enough time by the parents is the culprit opine by some. I agree with that as teen needs more love and could learn through their family than other media.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
Nowadays, a large number of social issues associated with teen peop...
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Line 5, column 77, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Spending
...gaged with a number of social problems. spending not enough time by the parents is the c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, look, moreover, so, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1300.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81481481481 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37544595481 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566666666667 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 406.8 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.8118458077 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.25 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.875 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.625 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21760830366 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0784234351418 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0779932314964 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12709711914 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0568407545224 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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