Some people think that watching sport is wastage of time during leisure time. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Enjoying sports during the free time considered as wastage of time by some individuals. I completely disagree with the statement, because it can be refreshed mind and could inspire many to be more active physically.
To start with, watching a sports program, particularly live telecast is not only interesting but also breathtaking for this reason it is one of the best time pass activity for stimulating anyone's mind. These shows are mostly unpredictable, as a result, people experience a different level of mental states such as happiness, sadness, anger. For example, if some one's favorite team is losing they are more likely to be unhappy conversely, winning team supporters would be in the cloud nine. In addition, this surely lightens up human mood because of its dramatic nature. Clearly, sports are the best option for leisure time activity.
Consequently, another wonderful benefit of this habit is, it could be the inspiration for the people who want to be fit and fine as people specifically teenagers tend to follow their idol. For instance, a renowned daily newspaper published an article relating to physical activity shows that 65% of young adults are somehow encouraged by sports celebrities to do regular exercise. Moreover, this practice could be a cure for obesity. So, watching sports in spare time is definitely not a waste of time rather, it is an excellent choice for motivating individual for working out.
In conclusion, Although some believe that enjoying sports in the past time is a misuse of time, however, I completely disagree with that. This practice is helpful for relaxing mind and it could be a key factor for encouraging people for being physically fit.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, conversely, however, if, moreover, so, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1416.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1119133574 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85936530934 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610108303249 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.5162693432 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.923076923 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3076923077 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.8461538462 7.06120827912 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239002163061 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102606789326 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112753415254 0.0667982634062 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172951365292 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0445058600498 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.