There is an increase of noise in our daily lives now a days? Why this is a problem? What can be done?
These days, production of noise has increased at an alarming rate in our everyday lives. This has become a major issue due to its devastating effect on human, especially, on children's physical and mental health. It might be difficult to stop it, however, this problem could be reduced by educating people and strict laws.
Firstly, the human has a certain limit of tolerating sound, if this crossed it will definitely create complications on not only individuals physical health but also on their mental state. Moreover, children are the prime victims. For example, children's ears are sensitive to high volume, as a result, they could be deaf. Secondly, on the other hand, noise might distract them while they are studying. In addition, concentration difficulty arises. For instance, honking in front of the school are prohibited because expert suggests that, it will more likely affect students focus on study. These negative reasons are proved that an increase in noise is harmful.
Even though it is tough to completely end this but by taking some effective measures this could be reduced. One of the solutions to this situation is to educate people as the majority of them are unaware of their ignorance. To give a clear example, citizens tend to honk everywhere without a second thought, which produce noise pollution. So, teach them the proper traffic rules might be helpful. Another measure is strict traffic laws; by doing this the government will be forcing individuals to lower sound. For example, adding a larger amount of penalty fees will discourage people from repeating mistakes, eventually, they will careful before making unnecessary noise. Educate people properly and stricter laws are the two effective solutions to minimize noise.
In conclusion, the increasing rate of noise is common in our daily life. This is injurious to both physical and mental health. Stricter punishment, as well as proper education, might be helpful to decrease noise.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 308, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...onk everywhere without a second thought, which produce noise pollution. So, teach...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1657.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22712933754 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67164308257 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605678233438 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.9476318592 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.85 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.85 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.1 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211637884538 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0635456393921 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.064886522635 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148497223745 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0526577739063 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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