more people are spending their free time watching movies. why is this? is it a good thing or bad thing?

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more people are spending their free time watching movies. why is this? is it a good thing or bad thing?

Enjoying movies as leisure time activity is quite popular nowadays, as, many people choose to do that. This is because it's easy and convenient. In my opinion, it has some negative effects still watching movies brings a positive impact on people mind.

In modern days, humans have busy work schedules and free times are valuable. Going to the cinema or surfing the internet for watching a movie is much more convenient than doing other things such as sports, reading etc. Which is why people tend to choose this way to pass their relaxing time. Another fact is different genre movie could help people to refresh their mind in their stressful life plus it would be a great activity for family times. For these reasons, myriad prefer to enjoy movies in their spare time rather than doing other things.

A great movie can change any person's perspective on a certain topic. Even though movie buff could be harmful, but watching it on weekends has mostly a good choice. Individuals are always concern about their job which brings physical and mental stress. Nevertheless, after busy working days there remains no energy to do other work besides sit in a comfortable place, having some popcorns while seeing a great piece of art. So, this is certainly a good thing.

In conclusion, more people prefer to entertain by a film in their off time. This process is not only peaceful but also trouble-free that's why it has become a well-known activity. Because of its powerful effect on person mind, I consider it as a blessing.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, nevertheless, so, still, well, while, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1253.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83783783784 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37972558746 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.640926640927 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 384.3 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.1992098633 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.3125 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1875 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.625 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309077622274 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0994205915848 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.082383739389 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177065522563 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0617857364931 0.056905535591 109% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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