The manufacturing and use of cars damages the environment but their popularity is increasing. Why is this happening? How could this be controlled?
Nowadays, there are a lot of people who own a car, although the environment is still damaged. This trend is mainly due to both personal and objective reasons. However, there are a number of measures that can be implemented to resolve the issue of not only the car’s possession but also environmental pollution.
There are many reasons why people want to buy a car, although it can damage their environment, and one of them is the personal reason. With the improvement of the economical condition of each individual, they usually buy a car as their ordinary personal vehicle. Take some Asian country as an example, some citizens there often buy a kind of car to satisfy their demand for travelling. Moreover, we also should mention the objective reason. That means due to the improvement of industrialism and infrastructure, it is convenient for some people to drive with their cars.
However, it has a number of ways to control this situation. First, the government should be the pioneer on protecting their own environment, and they should restrict the amount of vehicles causing the CO2 emission, which lead to the rise in the level of greenhouse gas. Secondly, some companies also might take part in investing in green resources so that they can earn a huge profit in the near future. Tesla Company is the typical example in this case, when the common product of its is the electric cars. Finally, people have to contribute to keep our green space around their destination, so they will think about other kinds of vehicles to reduce the amount of cars.
To conclude, the improvement of both financial condition and infrastructure lead to the ubiquitous use of cars despite environmental pollution. Only when the government has a restriction in using automobiles and the green resources become an alternative fuel, will this situation be resolved.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1554.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02912621359 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91126541613 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53074433657 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 488.7 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.681636589 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.6 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.46666666667 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213893043912 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.070323931125 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0459980870694 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128341208497 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0185491792573 0.056905535591 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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