Many cannot speak or present well in public some people think that this is important to speak well in public, so the training should be from school. You agree or disagree.
In today's era, to express something it is must that a person should have confidence to speak in public so, it has been seen that many people hesitate to present themselves in huge crowd whereas, it is elixir to speak proficiently in public so, for this school should train children for better future. In this essay, I will agree on the above statement and discuss on the same.
Nowadays, whether one is working in corporate or a sole proprietor, everyone has to deal with number of people. Sometimes, to convey their message they arrange meetings or conferences where public speaking skills are must but, many people still hesitate to speak among the audience and hire other people to present on behalf of them hence, it is must that public speaking should be a part of schooling where children can learn plethora of ways to overcome the fear moreover, school is the only place where mistakes can be done and mentors help them to improve themselves. Public speaking cannot be learned in one go, it is a continuous learning process.
On the other hand, schools are the best place to learn new things. Firstly, there is no one to compete and tease them whereas in real world where competition is at peak, people find reason to deteriorate the performance of another people by realizing their weaknesses. Secondly, if a person has overcomed this phobia in school then in their job career they will be succeeded because, they know how to present themselves in public and influence them whereas, people who are confident have my rates of opportunities in career. Lastly, not everyone get chance to learn these things in school but there are some other ways to learn these skills.
By concluding this, no doubt, public speaking is must but in this tough competition it is crucial that schools should prepare children to face every hurdle.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 180, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e hesitate to present themselves in huge crowd whereas, it is elixir to speak pro...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, if, lastly, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, then, whereas, as to, no doubt, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1533.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86666666667 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51886307723 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533333333333 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 119.062546588 49.4020404114 241% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 153.3 106.682146367 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.5 20.7667163134 152% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.8 7.06120827912 181% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.36322822872 0.244688304435 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130170114613 0.084324248473 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105035796144 0.0667982634062 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.23526528877 0.151304729494 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0780782738329 0.056905535591 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.0946893788 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.56 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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