Many Countries aim to improve their living standard by economic development, but some important social values are lost as a result.
Do you think the advantages of economic development outweigh the disadvantages?
Society growth is mix of different values. Although economic development is essential for the country’s growth, which brings wealth and sustainable environment for people, there are some drawbacks that occur during this process. In this essay, I will discuss more how the economy could become more beneficial if the government take into consideration.
Economic stability is vital for each society. So the most government put more effort and investment on it. Creating a job and making a situation for young people to become more counterproductive in their country, and they are willing to cooperate with social growth are some of the positive aspects of economic growth. Besides, people feel secure if they invest their money in the different sector they aren’t afraid of losing their assets. For instance, in some countries like Canada, they accept the immigrant workforce to maintain their economic because they believe that their people need to keep their economic growth, which brings wealth to their nation. So without any doubt, living standard for people will eventually create when the economic growth is stable.
However, society has different values such as human rights, freedom in religion, which some country are dismissed. Human rights are not considered when some rich country need workforces. Some employer-paid their employee the lowest salary for their most difficult work. If they would have complained about their right, they threatened them to fire. Further, the religion among people have become useless.
All in all, economy growth is essential for many society if other values are take it into consideration. Otherwise, values are bounded to the money and people just looking for money to make them happier where as it is apparently is not true.
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... looking for money to make them happier where as it is apparently is not true.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, besides, however, if, look, so, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1509.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37010676157 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68770695872 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55871886121 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 54.3839073164 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.3125 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5625 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0625 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197412602355 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0651253655472 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0535237664496 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110372677389 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0515722592671 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.57 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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