In Many countries, the level of crime is increasing and crimes are becoming more violent. why do you think this is and what can be done about it?
It has been observed that crime-rates have increased tremendously in most countries across the world. The crimes have grown severe and have become a threat to the modern world. I agree with this statement and believe the internet technology to be the main cause of this phenomenon. To solve this burgeoning issue, the government can play an important role.
To begin with, the modern generation seems more aggressive since few decades. The prime reason for this behaviour is because most of the population today remain occupied in playing computer games. Although the games do not exhibit real characters, they cultivate this abnormal behaviour in their nature. For instance, in my daughter's school, the teacher advised parents for not allowing their wards to play digital games because those children start fighting with their classmates as if they are playing a game. Secondly, the internet is widely used among people of all ages. As some illicit content on the internet cannot be censored, the tender minds get spoiled on watching them on youtube or immoral websites. Thus, the technology, which has triggered violence among the populace needs to be controlled.
However, just like every problem has a solution; the crime issue can also be addressed. To combat this situation, the government should run awareness programmes and educate citizens to live in harmony. In addition, criminals should be punished strictly so that people fear to get involved in such activities. Therefore, if the country's governing body keeps a strict check on criminal activities then the nation can surely enjoy a peaceful environment without crimes.
In conclusion, I pen down saying that violence and crimes are the outcomes of modern technologies. Admittedly, technology cannot be limited but the government can definitely play a significant role in resolving the concern by running awareness campaign along with the framing of strict laws for the criminals.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, thus, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1647.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33009708738 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75829933963 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637540453074 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 10.0 2.52805611222 396% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.4750519083 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.8823529412 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1764705882 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.29411764706 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183644223175 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0565361557015 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0405128867729 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112153649896 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0502468695642 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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