To get a good job today it is more important for children to study mathematics and foreign languages than art and music. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
it is commonly believed that subjects such as mathematics and foreign language should be given more preference than art or music because mathematical skills and multi-language abilities are much required to secure a good job. although these subjects have significance in job-market, I disagree to a large extent with the belief that children should be taught to focus only on mathematics and foreign languages and not on art and music. The art and music showcase its culture and child showing interest in these subjects can play important role in preserving the cultural heritage of the country.
The foremost reason for learning other subjects such as art and music is because of the cultural aspects associated with it. Since cultural heritage and traditions are seen in folk dances, songs and paintings, it is crucial to learn the skills such that it can be passed to next generation. Unequivocally, if the children are not taught art and music related subjects in school, they will never learn about the cultural value of their own country. Thus, every school should have these subjects in their curriculum so that new genera is well aware about the cultural elements of the country. Madhubani and worli painting, which is the art of ancient India is alive even today because many people have been learning these skills.
Another reason for learning art and music is owing to the fact that every child cannot be ascertain to show interest in math or language. Admittedly, it would be brutal act to force a kid to learn the subject thinking it to be important to land a descent job in future. without qualms, the contemporary era needs matchless talent and creativity that is observed in painters and musicians. The modern world has jobs in each field and we see painters, musicians and dancer to earn handsome money due to their distinguish style in work. This can be exemplified by paintings of M.F. Hussain which were sold at expensive price.
However, there are arguments that support the need of mathematics and foreign language in competitive world. Apparently, everyone need to know basic knowledge of calculations along with ways to communicate to survive in recent times. Consequently, it would not be entirely wrong to depict tha business cannot sustain without these abilities.
In conclusion, I pen down saying that although mathematics and foreign language has its significance in today's world, it would be wrong if we do not teach them art and music related subjects. Moreover, artist and musicians too has awesome jobs, so it is not true to say that a child can get employment only by learning mathematics and science. Therefore, art and music are important and should be taught in every educational institute.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, consequently, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 13.1623246493 198% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 26.0 10.4138276553 250% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2288.0 1615.20841683 142% => OK
No of words: 453.0 315.596192385 144% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05077262693 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61343653406 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75604566528 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 234.0 176.041082164 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516556291391 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 705.6 506.74238477 139% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.6729527343 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.421052632 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8421052632 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.15789473684 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269719941078 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0807432381063 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0797010471951 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151164173587 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0958471938497 0.056905535591 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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