Plastic bags, once an invention of science has become a nuisance for the society today. They are the main source of rubbish causing danger to not only sea life but also human beings. I completely agree with the statement. In this essay, I will explain the reasons for it.
To begin with, plastic is non biodegradable material, it can not be destroyed by natural means. It can only be disposed off by buring which causes air pollution, as burning of plastic emits harmful gases. Secondly, many countries do not have enough resources to recycle the plastic as it involves the huge expenditure from setting the plant to labour employed. These countries have huge problem of plastic disposal, most of them dispose it in the oceans or beneath the ground. It disturbs the ocean life, as plastic consumed by fishes leads to their death. In a recent studies, it was found out that death of most of the whales is caused due to plastic consumption. Thirdly, plastic buried beneath the ground causes infertility to soil. Strength of soil to withstand the plant decreases enormously, also depriving it from necessary nutrients required by plant for proper growth.
Apart from this, plastic causes ill effect on food stored in it. It is advised by the health experts not to use platic bags to pack the food for children. Moreover, plastic bags are not neccesity, it can be replaced by other biodegradable material such as paper. In most of the developed country they have already been replaced by paper bags. Big stores and outlets, accepting their responsibility towards society have started using either paper bags or cotton bags. As far as economically weaker countries are concerned, they can be aided by the world organisations to set up recycling plants to recycle the plastic bags thus stopping it from going into the oceans.
In conclusion, responsibility of protecting the earth and its enviorment lies with human race so we must do our best to protect it. Diversity of life both on land and sea is in danger, strict and quick actions are required to save them. Together by giving up plastic we can serve the nature and set a positive precedence.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 570, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'study'?
Suggestion: study
...ishes leads to their death. In a recent studies, it was found out that death of most of...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, thus, apart from, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1786.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 366.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87978142077 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65164743821 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579234972678 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 545.4 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.5419333315 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.0476190476 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4285714286 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.61904761905 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265459988071 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0757771541266 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0474970058079 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148819180387 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.052395827847 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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