In many countries schools have severe problems with student behavior.
what do you think are the causes of this ?
what solutions can you suggest ?
It has been observed that the students have severe problems with their behaviors in all parts of the world. Which is ultimately effecting their performance, personalities and careers. Obviously, It has some reasons and there are multiple ways of eradicating this critical issue.
There are many causes of disturbed student behaviors. Firstly, the schools, Collages and Universities explicitly concentrate more on grades and marks than on behavioral grooming of students. Which resultantly gravitate students towards stiff competitions, leaving them in mental stress which tantamount to disturbed attitudes of students. Secondly, there is a lack of extra curricular activities in educational Institutes. Usually, people of all age groups require leisure activities to keep them fit and socially connected. But, students in the present era need it more than anybody else, reason being the fatigue and tough study timings. Lastly, parents have left the fates of their children solely on schools and teachers. They do not concentrate on the mental and behavioral uplifting of their children.
There are some measure which need to be taken to strengthen the personalities of students. To being with, schools and colleges should teach students on moral grounds as well as they need to be taught regarding time and stress management. Furthermore, managements of schools and colleges should promote students get together to relieve their study pressures. Moreover, It is the need of the hour that educational Institutes shall improvise the study techniques i.e. delving in professional and personal grooming than just reading the books.
In a nutshell, it is widely accepted that behaviors of students have been reckless in recent world. But it has some reasons, which need to be identified and resolved in order to have progressive society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'begin'?
Suggestion: begin
...gthen the personalities of students. To being with, schools and colleges should teach...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, lastly, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, then, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1560.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51236749117 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92454864969 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56183745583 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.5628854233 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.7647058824 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6470588235 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.52941176471 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160625240578 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0550437131233 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0609983583027 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103866265265 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0324781868802 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.38 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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