In many countries in the world people buy clothes and choose hairstyles according to latest fashion? Why is this happening? Is this a positive or a negative development?
There is no doubt that a healthy body is a result of a balanced diet and regular exercise. Some people opine that the health care facility should be a paid service, regardless of a person’s salary.
Admittedly, people are supposed to be responsible for their health by adopting a healthy lifestyle and; therefore, they can stay away from most of the health-related illnesses, such as diabetes, obesity, and fatty liver. Fatly liver is the primary cause of ten thousand deaths per year in America only. Hence, combating these diseases at an initial level is extremely easy, irrespective of whether the government or an individual is paying for the treatment as it puts a minute effect on the pocket of the spender.
However, many people believe that salaried people pay heavy taxes throughout their life. Hence, free education and medical benefit are the rights of every citizen and should be provided free of cost, no matter what the salary of a person is or was. For example, in the old age, there is no source of income and if the elderly have to take money out from their savings to get medical treatment or pay their medical bills, they will not be left with much money to support or enjoy other luxuries. Hence, the higher authorities are solely responsible for endowing its fellow countrymen with basic human care.
To conclude, although we can keep most of the illnesses at bay by choosing a healthy life, it does not mean that the government can charge people for health care facilities if they are unable to look after themselves as are paying taxes to the ministry to support our needs.
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- A government has a responsibility to its citizens to ensure their safety Therefore some people think that the government should increase spending on defence but spend less on social benefits To what extent do you agree 81
- The tendency for human beings to copy one another is shown in the popularity of fashions in clothes and other consumer’s goods. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 89
- Today people can work and live in anywhere they want because of the improvement of communication technology and transport Do advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages Opinion and discussion essay 84
- Nowadays children are experiencing too much educational and social pressure. What are the reasons for this? What can be done to reduce the pressure? 84
- Some people believe that after hundred years life will be easier for most of people while the others are unsure What is your opinion 93
Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, look, so, therefore, for example, no doubt, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1336.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82310469314 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59315363538 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.599277978339 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.019490001 49.4020404114 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.6 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.7 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.1 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0441641172963 0.244688304435 18% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0195044148002 0.084324248473 23% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0312017617588 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0278535584507 0.151304729494 18% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00982023439495 0.056905535591 17% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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