Many criminals commit further crime as soon as they are released from prison. What do you think are the causes of this? What possible solutions can you suggest?
The crime rate has dramatically increased these days, in spite of the punishment many convicts repeat crime once they get released. This trend is mainly due to social stigma and lack of emotional support. However, there is a range of measures that could be implemented to solve this issue.
One of the reasons of recurring crime by criminals is lack of moral support from the society. People often deem that prisoners are not able to work again as they are not trustworthy and more a devious person. As a result, offenders after getting a release from the prison have no option of the job. Moreover, the financial crisis pushes them to do an unlawful act again. In addition to this, people do not want ex-convicts to reside in their communities and treat them with suspicion. Hence, all these factors lead to hopelessness and straightforwardly which promotes violence.
However, there are a number of ways to tackle the problem of increasing crime by ex-prisoners. Firstly, the government should provide constant psychological counseling as it is necessary for criminals to get themselves in the right direction. Secondly, not only it will heal ex-offenders through roots, but also enhance the lateral thinking which can help them to do useful works. Lastly, society should also change their mindset and attitude towards prisoners and assist them whenever needed.
To conclude, lack of psychological support and poor perception of society leads prisoners to commit a crime again after getting released from lock-up. Only when the government and society ensure to boost them with moral support and having no bias among citizens, will this situation be remedied.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 187, Rule ID: MORE_A_JJ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'a more devious'?
Suggestion: a more devious
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, lastly, moreover, second, secondly, so, in addition, as a result, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1402.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19259259259 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80650821132 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607407407407 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.1683438953 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 93.4666666667 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182581572453 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0563756181377 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.037193511754 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107798745902 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0216311225131 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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