Many elderly people are no longer looked after by their families but are put in care homes or nursing homes. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?
Nowadays, care homes or nursing homes for elderly people are really popular because their families are unable to take care of them. My essay below will analyse both the benefits and drawbacks of this trend.
Putting the elderly people in care homes or nursing homes is advantageous in some certain aspects. Firstly, the elderly individuals can be given many professional health services. There has a large of experts who can give them nutritional meals, prevent them from some diseases or ease their pain. Secondly, families’ members can spend time building their careers. They don’t need to waste time for caring elderly people who have good health services in care homes.
From an opposite angle, this trend also has many disadvantages. First of all, elderly individuals can feel sad and lonely. They are able to miss their family or they think they are burdens. Secondly, the cost for caring elderly people in nursing homes are really high because of professional services.
In conclusion, care homes bring good profits but it also has deleterious effects.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, really, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 41.998997996 40% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 900.0 1615.20841683 56% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 173.0 315.596192385 55% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20231213873 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 4.20363070211 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58065135875 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 176.041082164 59% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.595375722543 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 283.5 506.74238477 56% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.7576299781 49.4020404114 46% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 75.0 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4166666667 20.7667163134 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.375267661358 0.244688304435 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133472642962 0.084324248473 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0999850466478 0.0667982634062 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222672566999 0.151304729494 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0834134933368 0.056905535591 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 78.4519038076 50% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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