Lack of sleep makes daily life more difficult.
It is true that if people don’t sleep enough, they will confront many difficulties in the modern time. First of all, it can affect people seriously because they cannot focus on their work or study, and it leads the result of them worse. Moreover, people don’t keep their mind well. They do not remember exactly what they want to do or what did they do yesterday. Secondly, sleeplessness makes people’s immune system weaker. They feel tired and easy to catch diseases such as flu, heartbreak or diabetes. Additionally, lacking of sleep makes individuals’ skin uglier. A woman who sleeps from 6 to 8 hours has skin better and stronger than a sleepless woman. Lastly, a person who doesn’t sleep enough is easy to get accidents. Because of lacking of sleep, they are not conscious enough to control their driving. To sum up, individuals should avoid sleep deficiency.
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- Lack of sleep makes daily life more difficult. 22
- Lack of sleep makes daily life more difficult. 22
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, lastly, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, such as, first of all, it is true, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 41.998997996 36% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 742.0 1615.20841683 46% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 147.0 315.596192385 47% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04761904762 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.48200454523 4.20363070211 83% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90046520626 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 176.041082164 59% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.700680272109 0.561755894193 125% => OK
syllable_count: 212.4 506.74238477 42% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.9300048837 49.4020404114 46% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 67.4545454545 106.682146367 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.3636363636 20.7667163134 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.18181818182 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140194692555 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0659952824248 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0733794896209 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140194692555 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 50.2224549098 150% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 11.3001002004 53% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 78.4519038076 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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