Lack of sleep makes daily life more difficult.
In modern times/In the modern world/In modern society, many people confront many difficulties because of not having enough sleep. First of all, lack of sleep can significantly affect working/study efficiency. It deprives people of the concentration and attention, so they find it harder to absorb information. Moreover, they even do not remember exactly what they want to do or what they did the day before. Secondly, sleeplessness causes health issues. It makes people’s immune system weaker, so they feel tired and are prone to catch diseases such as flu, heart attack and diabetes. Additionally, lack of sleep partly contribute to aging of the skin. For instance, a person sleeping from seven to eight hours has better and stronger skin than an individual getting less sleep. Lastly, insufficient sleep can increase the possibility of serious accidents. People are able to lose their control by reason of the fatigue. For example, drivers who do not get enough sleep often cause fatal accidents. To sum up, individuals should try to have sufficient sleep to avoid needless suffering in life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, lastly, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, such as, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 13.1623246493 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 924.0 1615.20841683 57% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 176.0 315.596192385 56% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 4.20363070211 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88707936724 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.704545454545 0.561755894193 125% => OK
syllable_count: 278.1 506.74238477 55% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.9330445529 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 77.0 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6666666667 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.58333333333 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179698099975 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0622326529386 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0564281422431 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179698099975 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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