Many people are now spending more and more time travelling to work or school, some people believe that this has negative development while others think there are some benefits.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Spending more time for traveling to work or school has become increasingly common these days. There are several reasons attributed to this trend, but major ones are considered. This essay will discuss on the positives of this emerging circumstantial situation and the other side of it.
Traveling does take time in general and has become a norm in everyday life. The traveling is mainly due to ones home is far away from the work or school. The time is always been an important factor, so during such traveling time people usually have the choice of reading books or news paper. With the advent of the hand held devices these days the options have increased. Some people even tend to do online learning of some short skills that are necessary to overcome the household chores or that is required at their work. So having these possibilities many tend to settle farther from their work due to the cost effects of living in a far away suburb.
Spending more time for traveling to work or school is a growing concern. Suppose the time that is being traveled is more that 1 hour to reach work or school the stress of getting ready early slowly turns into set back in ones mental health. Traveling on daily basis also impacts the body health wise even if one is not engaging in maneuvering of the vehicle. This has been emphasized on an article published in New York Daily last year on its health column about the people travelling more than an hour daily to work and back home. In case of students using public transportation there are numerous social impact due to their encounter with strangers.
So, if one weighs both sides it appears that there could be negative impact on a long time basis but provided the travel is safe and thorough planning involved then the effects could be negligible. In my opinion if one could avail the metro from a point to point basis then it is not an impact to health. As there is always several circumstances it will be hard to rule out negative impacs too.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, in general, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1646.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 355.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63661971831 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40386846861 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538028169014 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.9522276464 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.8235294118 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8823529412 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.94117647059 7.06120827912 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286943629019 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0887296836341 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0743112257967 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16459707833 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0582951994839 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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