Many people believe that international tourism a bad thing for their countries.
What are the reason for this?
What can be done to change this negative attitude towards international tourism?
Many personal consider that international touring in active thing for their nation. There are numerous reasons which are responsible for uprooting the problem. However, some solvents are there to curb this problem. I will discuss its factor and remedies in following segments.
There are numerous of reasons tourists are affecting the countries. Primarily, the tourist are come from other countries, there are nobody knows who is person is this and where from come in this country. Sometime, those person are criminal and they are affecting the countries in many way, they are generate many problem in country atmosphere. In addition the tourist are commit crime and some other things like drugs, robbery, thefting.
In other hand there are many solvents are there to stop the crime. Firstly the government should bain the tourist are coming in other countries. If the person are come from other countries so that person has genuine they are not having include in any crime. If government should take step so the negative attitude tourist is decreased in countries add your master of countries is peace. There are no crime is increasing. Moreover, in past time, government donot not check the identity of person in a better way but now in the present authority should take responsibility for Care countries from criminals those are come from other countries as like general person.
In conclusion, everyone has their own views. I do not deny any of them but I cogitate if the government should create law for tourists those are coming from other countries who are genuine in identity and government should check for the identity and take responsibility of person so that crime rate is decreasing in every country
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'this person' or 'those people', 'those persons'?
Suggestion: this person; those people; those persons
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun way seems to be countable; consider using: 'many ways'.
Suggestion: many ways
...and they are affecting the countries in many way, they are generate many problem in coun...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'generated'.
Suggestion: generated
...ing the countries in many way, they are generate many problem in country atmosphere. In ...
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Suggestion: many problems
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Suggestion: addition,
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Suggestion: committed
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Message: Did you mean 'pastime'?
Suggestion: pastime
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 13.1623246493 198% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1439.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08480565371 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60706512629 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.459363957597 0.561755894193 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 67.7389001516 49.4020404114 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.9375 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6875 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.625 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136061913669 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0569694899866 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0567629972792 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109568589006 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0663563522734 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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