Many people believe that women make better parents than men and that is why they have the greater role in raising children in most societies. Others claim that men are just as good as women at parenting.
Parenting is an extremely important reason for the proper upbringing of a child. Some people are of the opinion that women make good parents some other believe that men can also be effective in parenting. In my opinion, what matter most is the quality of a good parent and that can either be a man or woman.
By virtue of having more patience women tend to handle children better during infancy where patience play an important role. The right amount of vitamins and protein is again better done by women. For example,a mother know that what she need to add in lunch. A mother is considered more close to a child than father, which enables a child to establish a more deep relationship.
If we talk about global prospective than we can easily find that woman spends most of the time with their kids and the influence of here habits and behaviour can be seen easily in a growing up child. A recent study has revealed that women are in the best place to understand their child temperament than anyone else.
On the other hand, Mens contribution to a child development is considered vital during the growing up years where imbibing discipline is an important factor. A man can help his children to learn social skills, he can make sure that his child wakes up on time and devote right amount of time to Study and recreational activities, which will help him to grow socially.
Furthermore, men are in the best place to share their bread earning skills as in most of the countries man takes the responsibility to cater families day to day need.
In conclusion,We should not compare parents on the basis of their gender, its totally depends on the habits and strengths coincides with the abilities to need a good parent. Both play an important part for the physical and mental development.
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- What are the advantages of advancement in food preparation method. Discuss both pros and cons. 78
- Many people believe that women make better parents than men and that is why they have the greater role in raising children in most societies. Others claim that men are just as good as women at parenting 56
- Many people believe that women make better parents than men and that is why they have the greater role in raising children in most societies. Others claim that men are just as good as women at parenting. 73
- Many people believe that women make better parents than men and that is why they have the greater role in raising children in most societies. Others claim that men are just as good as women at parenting. 67
- Many people believe that women make better parents than men and that is why they have the greater role in raising children in most societies. Others claim that men are just as good as women at parenting 73
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1485.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71428571429 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5866490559 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536507936508 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.7247694658 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.071428571 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57142857143 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223681946927 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0758024905268 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0780832419035 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104604169326 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0675247266959 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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