Many people believe that women make better parents than men and that is why they have the greater role in raising children in most societies. Others claim that men are just as good as women at parenting
Parenting is an extremely important reason for the proper upbringing of a child. Many people are think that women makes good parents but some other believe that men can also be effective in parenting. In my views there can not be conclusion drawn in general inference on the basis of gender, what maters most is the quality of a good parent and that can either be a man or woman.
Women by virtue of having more patience, tend to handle children better during infancy when patience play a major role for child care.Ensuring nutritious diet is again better done by women. For example, a mother is considered in the best place to know that what his child needs to take for lunch and his eating habits. A recent study has indicated that imbibing moral, values and ethics in a child is done best by mothers. However many people have the notion that women do not fit for the disciplinary aspects.
On the other hand, Men contribution to a child development is considered very vital during the growing up years, as imbibing discipline becomes the most important factor. For example a father can make sure that his child walks up on time and devote the right amount of time to study and outdoor activities. Many studies have indicated that the children those who are addicted to a particular activity, for example, say computer games, turn to be a loner and loose the skills to interact with other people. In most of the countries, father play a role of breadwinner and can be the best person to share the survival strategies with there young ones.
In conclusion, it is perplexing to say that who is better in parenting as each person possess their unique strength and if their strengths coincides with the quality to become a good parent then irrespective of their gender they can be good in parenting.
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- Many people believe that women make better parents than men and that is why they have the greater role in raising children in most societies. Others claim that men are just as good as women at parenting 73
- Many people believe that women make better parents than men and that is why they have the greater role in raising children in most societies. Others claim that men are just as good as women at parenting 56
- Many people believe that women make better parents than men and that is why they have the greater role in raising children in most societies. Others claim that men are just as good as women at parenting. 67
- Many people believe that women make better parents than men and that is why they have the greater role in raising children in most societies. Others claim that men are just as good as women at parenting. 73
- What are the advantages of advancement in food preparation method. Discuss both pros and cons. 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 135, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Ensuring
...tience play a major role for child care.Ensuring nutritious diet is again better done by...
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Line 3, column 247, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...other is considered in the best place to know that what his child needs to take f...
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Line 3, column 425, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...ics in a child is done best by mothers. However many people have the notion that women ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, then, for example, in conclusion, in general, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1490.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70031545741 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5472712441 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533123028391 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.7960608611 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.166666667 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4166666667 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.58333333333 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273649005082 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100493914725 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.09781420885 0.0667982634062 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160103262207 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0570291964609 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.28 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.