Many people say that the only way to guarantee a good job is to complete a course of university education. Others claim that it is better to start work after school and gain experience in the world of work. How far do you agree or disagree with the above views?
Opinions differ as to whether the completion of a tertiary course will be a decisive factor in securing a great job or early exposure to a working environment after high school will be a better choice for people. In my opinion, I am of the first idea as it is all about university degrees in today’s job market.
To begin with, it is understandable why some people claim that starting working right after finishing statutory education is beneficial. One reason is that individuals would be ahead of those who pursue higher education in terms of practical experience. By having a job earlier, students would be able to familiarize themselves with real-life working conditions such as hard customers and non-cooperative colleagues. They, therefore, may be enabled to handle these problems easily in the future when competing at work with the university graduates.
However, I side with those who think that gaining a degree from higher education is the foundation stone of people’s future career. One reason to support my standpoint is that, in the current world, large companies’ employers no longer trust in non-proven skills showcased in candidates’ resumes. Even in an interview, the interviewer still cannot fully judge whether the interviewees’ abilities are completely competent for the job. Thus, a university degree will genuinely prove that people have at least learned and acquired the required skills from a certified institution. In Vietnam, for example, there is currently no competition for individuals to apply for job vacancies in the banking system without possessing a degree from a university.
In conclusion, I assert that going through a course of tertiary education is the only way to find a decent job in today’s world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 17, Rule ID: WHETHER[6]
Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "as to"?
Suggestion: whether
Opinions differ as to whether the completion of a tertiary course wil...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, so, still, therefore, thus, as to, at least, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1500.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33807829181 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.2425573064 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612099644128 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.9089541585 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 125.0 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4166666667 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.25 7.06120827912 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208628683944 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0744367067105 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0554511666202 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129371082492 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0351050381001 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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