Many people spend a lot of money on looks clothes, haircuts and beauty product to enhance their appearance. Some people think that it is good way to spend money, while others think that there is a better way to spend it. Discuss both views and give opinion.
At present, modernization has discovered the hunger of healthy and wealthy appearance in people which encourage them to spend big chunk of money on clothes, haircuts, beauty products and so on. Unwillingly, it has given birth to the both positive and negative thoughts about it in society. However, some people are in Favour of this activity wherever other thinks differently. I will discuss both views with supporting points and give my opinion in upcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, having a good look and appearance has become a dream of all people in this society. Like, it boosts up their confidence to perform better than others in this competitive era. Secondly, most of the people love to update themselves with current global status and indirectly it influences them to buy new clothes frequently and having new haircuts. Most importantly, there is no doubt that busy and hectic lifestyle has put the negative impacts on our health. As a result, majority of people are facing problems like dark circles, pimples and other skin problems so beauty products enable them to maintain them appearance.
On the other hand, others think opposite about this propaganda. First and foremost, they think it is a wastage of money. To support this, people should save money and be prepared for any unpredictable future incidents. Secondly, they believe that inner beauty is more worthful rather than outer appearance. For example, they support this view that people should donate money for charities and to feed poor people in spite of buying unnecessary products or they can spend that money on their education to educate themselves or others too.
At last, after describing both views and I can conclude that it is everyone’s right to look good but people should not overlook their expenses for maintaining their looks and clothes and the side effects of beauty products. Undoubtly, they should work on their inner beauty such as their education and be kind to others which will help them in the long run.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, for example, no doubt, such as, as a result, in spite of, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1679.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05722891566 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62209997131 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55421686747 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.3961828575 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.9375 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.75 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.9375 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.358798228063 0.244688304435 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106119251896 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0638355126176 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213815400335 0.151304729494 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0631466404216 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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