Many people like to wear fashionable clothes.
Why do you think this is the case?
Is this a good thing or a bad thing?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience.
Write at least 250 words.
Clothes were one of the basic needs for the mankind. Nowadays, most of the people are interested in wearing classy dresses for business, festival and other occasional events. This essay will discuss the reasons for putting on fashionable clothes and gives the positive opinion.
Firstly, many people prefer high fashioned clothes because they give a rich look and appearance. In the past, branded clothes were highly expensive that only rich people can afford it. But later the belief was changed. Even a middle class person can buy a Raymond shirt and a trouser at a reasonable price nowadays. While, the others want to share their beautiness and wealth to the world. Let us consider the celebrities for instance, they wear costly dresses to parties and many social events to show their dressing style. They are the brand ambassadors for textile companies, inspiring many youngsters to know the current dressing trend.
Secondly, many people argue whether wearing the clothes of different style is good or bad. According to me, there is no negative aspect in wearing them. Because, clothes give you confident and earns respect from others. For example, a person attending an interview could show his confidence by wearing a well fashioned attire. Another example is about a celebrity, who was once insulted by his fellow worker for wearing dhoti to an event which was an old fashion and was later respected and inspired by his clothing style. Thus, clothes give you a special and unique identity in this modern society.
In conclusion, this essay discussed the reasons for wearing fashionable clothes and shared the positive aspects about it. Moreover, the clothing style changes day by day and people show interest in buying them without hesitation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 92, Rule ID: ACCORDING_TO_ME[1]
Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
...thes of different style is good or bad. According to me, there is no negative aspect in wearing...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1481.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17832167832 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49838570797 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601398601399 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.1097485671 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.2777777778 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8888888889 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.77777777778 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197179837289 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0663946448888 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0476136380451 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129631173746 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0263106410914 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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