Many people work long hours, leaving very little time for leisure activities.
Does this situation has more advantages or more disadvantages ?
Working for longer periods of time, keeps people away from leisurely activities. In my opinion, however, it has an adverse effects both physically and mentally resulting in serious illness.
On the one hand, we live in a competitive world, where we work hard to secure a higher position, thereby improving our financial status in the society. We all crave for a luxurious life, and crazily slog extra hours to afford materialistic satisfaction. Workaholic groups, feel their leisurely activity is work altogether. For example, Narayanamoorthy, founder of Infosys, one of the biggest software company, who once worked more hours to achieve, the position today. Nevertheless, all the efforts put in today, never goes in vain.
On the other hand, workers are open to risks namely obesity, cardiac diseases and psychological illness. While, the high-pressure duties keep the stress levels increased, many of them are already on medications in their mid-30s. Furthermore, it is evident with the decreasing life span among stressed working community, showing how worse the problem is.
In addition, although, the job demands high working hours, it is every individual’s responsibility to spend enough time on a fitness regime or a sport. Even though, we are running behind work all day, it is high time we understand the importance of clean eating and exercise. For example, news relating to employee’s death at workplace, due to cardiac arrest, shook the working professionals recently. Moreover, it is good to have games and sports now and then, to push employees, take some time for themselves even during the office hours or outside this time.
In conclusion, without any hindrance to fun time, duty hours have to be managed by the working population, as the consequences are unimaginable loss to mankind. Health is wealth, key for a happy living.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 178, Rule ID: EVERY_NOW_AND_THEN[1]
Message: Use simply 'now and then'.
Suggestion: now and then
...er, it is good to have games and sports every now and then, to push employees take some time for t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, then, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1573.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33220338983 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05669872034 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.667796610169 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.8309834501 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.3125 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4375 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.75 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211833383033 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0614095716891 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0607704816832 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0980311340552 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0391752966153 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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